It's very clear that your strength is writing. Slow the the text so we can read it, I was actually interested in it! For what it is, it's an admirable project. I hope to get something like this together at some point, I understand making a game is tough though. You're writing is quality, so I think it should be integrated into the directions. Instead of "get to the bar", I think the directions could be written in first person: "I'm thristy, and I might as well get acquainted with the locals while I'm here." Good luck in the future.

I liked the game but i think it needed sounds and easier to understand ui elements

Add some sounds, slow down the text, and keep going! This could be very very cool and I like what I saw so far!

It's cool, i got into the crypts and the game turned black screen, gotta add some soundscapes to the background, improve pathing i guess, and a lot of the objects doesn't have collision.

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something crawls in the walls

reminds me a little bit of the game alone in the dark 1992

This is what is world needed