Okay so, the review will be bad, we only have some walls ( with gaps between them, some without textures). I will try it again, in a couple of weeks. Things that hopefully will be better then are: Gaps in the walls, It's so simple to make sure that the walls are aligned, the sounds ( a scare sound dosen't need to bee loud, or in this case ear r*pe loud, just make it scare with a normal volume) and the confusing layout, put it on paper see if it looks like a decent building, everything is confusing, try making some signs or anything that shows you wich room is the one you want to go, maybe different colours something like that. Needs a lot of work, I know it's your first project that's why I will check it again later. If it's improving the review will change to a better one. Keep up the good work! :)